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Online education is becoming increasingly popular. many students are choosing to study online instead of face-to-face education. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this new approach?

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As the development grows rapidly over the past few years. Online learning is becoming a trend. The vast majority of
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 prefer to study on the Internet rather than in verbal education. In
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 essay, I will take both views into consideration and give the reason why, I think online studying brings more benefits than drawbacks. On the first hand, the major impact of online learning is
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 cannot focus completely.
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 the tutor is instructing, the teacher cannot guide you on a video call properly. The learner can mute the call and start playing games.
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, the education Department shows that
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 who are learning from videos call are not giving concentrating which leads to poor performance on results.
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, another issue of
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 can be a disturbance
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 attending classes from video calls. Most significantly, other family members
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 as the child can make noise.
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, it will distract the learner
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 attending online classes.
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, the benefit of Internet learning can be convenient. There are many applications
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 as Facebook, zoom and Instagram that have made it easy to communicate with tutors. To recite an example, In 2019 there was a massive outbreak of coronavirus
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 a lecturer taught
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 through video calls. It was easy for learners as they don't have to attend school and by sitting in their own room which will be beneficial for both teachers and learners.
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, it will be less expensive for
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 since it will save on travelling
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, food
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 and uniform
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. If they attend classes by going to school
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 they would spend more money which cannot be effective for those parents who cannot earn more money.
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, there is more significance in learning from different sites since it will be convenient and
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 save additional
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. It would be better for all the
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 to gain knowledge by not attending school.
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