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The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for future years.

The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for future years.
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The line graph illustrates a clear difference in the pattern of the relocating of
people
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 from rural areas to urban centres over a 25-year period, in the countries in question. The horizontal axis represents the years from 2000 to 2025 at 5-year intervals. The vertical axis represents the number of
people
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 moving in units of 10
million
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. By far, the gap between the three is particularly noticeable between 2020 and 2025, with the highest difference in 2025: in Iran 95
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people
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 are expected to relocate from rural to urban areas,
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 in Russia and Indonesia will move much fewer
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, nearly 90
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 and 30
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 respectively. It is noteworthy that there are upward trends in the number of
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 moving over the years in all three countries.
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, figures for Russian movers started at approximately 15
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 in 2000, rose sharply over the years, were outstripped by the figure for Iranians in 2000 and finished at nearly 90
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 in 2025. Over the same period, figures for Indonesians becoming city dwellers rose slightly and are predicted to level off between 2020 and 2025 at exactly 20
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.
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