The given table shows the number of international visitors arrivals came to nine different countries and the percentage changes between 2009 and 2010.

The given table shows the number of international visitors arrivals came to nine different countries and the percentage changes between 2009 and 2010.
The given table shows the
number
of international
visitors
arrivals came to nine different countries and the percentage changes between 2009 and 2010.
Overall
,
it is clear that
France is one of the most attractive places over the period of 2 years. The opposite was true for that of Hongkong.
Besides
that,
Turkey
, China and Germany saw a sharp increase from 2009 to 2010. The
number
of foreign
visitors
coming to the US, Spain and Italy was 66, 55 and 44
million
in 2009 respectively. After 1 year, there was witnessed a gradual growth of 1
million
in both the US, Spain and
Turkey
. The figure for travellers coming to the UK was 3.6% which was 2 times as much as in Spain in 2 years. Meanwhile, the
number
of
visitors
welcomed in France remained unchanged at around 76
million
from 2009 to 2010.
On the other hand
, the
number
of foreign
visitors
coming to
Turkey
, China and Germany increased significantly from 33, 22 and 11
million
in 2009 to 45, 34 and 23 in 2010 respectively. The percentage of rates in Germany was the highest rate approximately 109% which was 2 times as much as in China and roughly 3.3 times higher than in
Turkey
. By
constract
Correct your spelling
contrast
, in 2009, the figure for travellers coming to Hongkong was 10
million
and 1 year later, Hongkong fell slightly by 1
million
travellers.
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