The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market.

The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market.
The bar chart reveals the number of tourists from Japan, that
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were
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travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995
while
the line chart illustrates how many
Japanese
visitors were in Australia at that time.
Overall
, we can see, how the number of
Japanese
tourists increased over the given period and the percentage of individuals who had chosen Australia as their destination, as well.
According to
the data given in the first chart, in 1985
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were
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5 million and kept rising until almost 16 million in 1995.
However
, in 1991 the number of
Japanese
travellers slightly decreased from 11 to 10 million, but
then
the situation changed and the percentage of tourists continued steadily growing. Mowing to the line graph, the Australian's share of the
Japanese
market was only 2 per cent.
Then
, the popularity of Australia in
Japanese
was growing by about 1 per cent a year till 1988.
Also
, there was a small drop in 1899.
In addition
, in 1993 the Australian's share hit an 8-year high, it was a bit more
thаn
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than
6 per cent.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words japanese with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • tourist market
  • overseas travel
  • tourism industry
  • international campaigns
  • economic prosperity
  • travel preferences
  • market share
  • fluctuations
  • peak
  • trend
  • attracting
  • destination
  • variability
  • contributing factors
  • currency exchange rates
  • speculate
  • tourism policies
  • competitive markets
  • popularity
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