The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market.
The bar chart reveals the number of tourists from Japan, that
was
travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 Correct subject-verb agreement
were
while
the line chart illustrates how many Japanese
visitors were in Australia at that time.
Overall
, we can see, how the number of Japanese
tourists increased over the given period and the percentage of individuals who had chosen Australia as their destination, as well.
According to
the data given in the first chart, in 1985 was
5 million and kept rising until almost 16 million in 1995. Correct subject-verb agreement
were
However
, in 1991 the number of Japanese
travellers slightly decreased from 11 to 10 million, but then
the situation changed and the percentage of tourists continued steadily growing.
Mowing to the line graph, the Australian's share of the Japanese
market was only 2 per cent. Then
, the popularity of Australia in Japanese
was growing by about 1 per cent a year till 1988. Also
, there was a small drop in 1899. In addition
, in 1993 the Australian's share hit an 8-year high, it was a bit more thаn
6 per cent.Correct your spelling
than
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