The diagrams below show the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrate the changes that have taken place in the coastal
village
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of Seaville from 1980 to 2010.
Overall
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, manifold changes were experienced in the coastal
village
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, one of those was the woodland totally converted into a golf course. In 1980, there were holiday
cottages
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and a marsh situated in the North - West of the
village
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. And there was a plane land opposite the
cottages
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and marsh. A river across the north-south of the
village
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and an east bank located at the south end of the
village
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. Tea rooms and sand dunes were in the south of the
village
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. The southwest and southeast of the
village
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are covered with sea.
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, In 2010, the holiday
cottages
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and marsh were totally demolished,
while
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built permanent houses were in the exact place. And
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woodland fully changed into a golf course. Many roads and buildings
such
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as a retirement
village
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and boat club in the plane land.restaurant and hotel were built in the place of a tea room and sand.
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, the holiday
cottages
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were constructed opposite the east bank
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words village, cottages with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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