The diagrams below show the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words..
The maps illustrate the changes that have taken place in the coastal
village
of Seaville from 1980 to 2010.
Overall
, manifold changes were experienced in the coastal village
, one of those was the woodland totally converted into a golf course.
In 1980, there were holiday cottages
and a marsh situated in the North - West of the village
. And there was a plane land opposite the cottages
and marsh. A river across the north-south of the village
and an east bank located at the south end of the village
. Tea rooms and sand dunes were in the south of the village
. The southwest and southeast of the village
are covered with sea.
Furthermore
, In 2010, the holiday cottages
and marsh were totally demolished, while
built permanent houses were in the exact place. And also
woodland fully changed into a golf course. Many roads and buildings such
as a retirement village
and boat club in the plane land.restaurant and hotel were built in the place of a tea room and sand. Finally
, the holiday cottages
were constructed opposite the east bankSubmitted by lakshmimahendran915 on
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