The diagrams below show the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the changes that have taken place in the coastal
village
of Seaville from 1980 to 2010.
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Overall
, manifold changes were experienced in the coastal Linking Words
village
, one of those was the woodland totally converted into a golf course.
In 1980, there were holiday Use synonyms
cottages
and a marsh situated in the North - West of the Use synonyms
village
. And there was a plane land opposite the Use synonyms
cottages
and marsh. A river across the north-south of the Use synonyms
village
and an east bank located at the south end of the Use synonyms
village
. Tea rooms and sand dunes were in the south of the Use synonyms
village
. The southwest and southeast of the Use synonyms
village
are covered with sea.
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Furthermore
, In 2010, the holiday Linking Words
cottages
and marsh were totally demolished, Use synonyms
while
built permanent houses were in the exact place. And Linking Words
also
woodland fully changed into a golf course. Many roads and buildings Linking Words
such
as a retirement Linking Words
village
and boat club in the plane land.restaurant and hotel were built in the place of a tea room and sand. Use synonyms
Finally
, the holiday Linking Words
cottages
were constructed opposite the east bankUse synonyms
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