The table below shows information about age, average income per person and population below poverty line in three states in the USA.
The given table illustrates metrics about the population in two different age groups, per capita
income
, and the percentage
of citizens living below the poverty
line in three states in the United States, namely California
, Utah
, and Florida
.
Overall
, Utah
has the largest proportion of young people aged under 18, and the smallest rate of senior citizens aged over 60. Although
, the amount of percentage
population
below Correct article usage
the population
poverty
line in Add an article
the poverty
California
is higher than two
others Correct article usage
the two
but
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apply
this
state has the highest average income
per person in three
comparison objects.
People under the age of 18 Correct article usage
the three
account
for over a quarter of Change to a plural noun
accounts
Utah
’s population, while
the figures for that in California
and Florida
are much lower, at 17% and 16% respectively. Standing at 23%, the percentage
of senior citizens aged over 60 in Florida
is nearly three times higher than Utah
. Meanwhile, the figure for that in Change preposition
in Utah
California
is 13%.
The average income
per person in Florida
is $22,000, which is $1,000 less than the average for those in California
. Additionally
, the proportion of the
Correct article usage
apply
poverty
in Florida
and California
are
12% and 16% respectively. Despite the fact that Change the verb form
is
Utah
has the lowest per capita income
at $17,000, this
state witnesses the lowest poverty
percentage
, at only nine percent
.Change the spelling
per cent
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