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Cultural tourism, where people travel in order to visit museums, monuments and archaeological sites among other things, is growing industry. Having so many visitors may sometimes benefit a nation`s cultural heritage, but can also cause problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#tourism #people #travel #visit #museums #monuments #sites #industry #visitors #benefit #nation`s #heritage
Industry
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 of tourism is useful for
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a budget
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 of
country
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the country
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 which the
country
 development by that and ancient cultural monuments. I completely agree with
this
 opinion and I think
this
 industry is beneficial
our
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country
. First of all, if many people visit to see historical places,
economics
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the economics
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 of
country
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the country
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 will get rich. That
provide
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provides
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 that
factual
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was
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were
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 safe
during
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for
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 many years.
In addition
, foreign visitors can pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions.
For example
,
Greece
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Greece's
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 government boosts its economy
due to
tourists
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tourist
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 arrivals.
Therefore
, the countries should take care
to
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of
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 the policy of improving their tourism activities.
Secondly
, if many foreigners visit
to
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our
country
, it can help the
laguage
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language
 skills of these young people to improve. When they meet
tourists
, they have the opportunity to talk to a native speaker. It is important in improving the efficiency of
language
 learning.
This
 is the result we have seen in the growth of the
language
 capabilities of the Indian youth during the time when the British ruled
in
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India.
Consequently
,
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the arrivals
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arrivals
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arrival
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 of
tourists
 cause increasing
of
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language
 experience.
On the other hand
, some people think that the visit of travellers can damage historical complexes. They pollute the
enviroment
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environment
.
In addition
, historical monuments are
also
 likely to suffer significant damage from
it
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them
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.
For instance
, the Egyptian government forbade climbing on it
due to
 the
possibilty
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possibility
 of damage to the Pyramids.
To conclude
, a large number of
tourists
 visiting the
country
 contributes greatly to the growth of the regional economy and the development of the
language
potensial
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potential
 of the population.
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