Cultural tourism, where people travel in order to visit museums, monuments and archaeological sites among other things, is growing industry. Having so many visitors may sometimes benefit a nation`s cultural heritage, but can also cause problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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of tourism is useful for

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of

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the country

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which the

country

development by that and ancient cultural monuments. I completely agree with

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opinion and I think

this

industry is beneficial

our

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country

. First of all, if many people visit to see historical places,

economics

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the economics

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of

country

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the country

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will get rich. That

provide

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provides

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that

factual

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was

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were

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safe

during

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for

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many years.

In addition

, foreign visitors can pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions.

For example

,

Greece

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Greece's

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government boosts its economy

due to

tourists

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arrivals.

Therefore

, the countries should take care

to

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the policy of improving their tourism activities.

Secondly

, if many foreigners visit

to

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our

country

, it can help the

laguage

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language

skills of these young people to improve. When they meet

tourists

, they have the opportunity to talk to a native speaker. It is important in improving the efficiency of

language

learning.

This

is the result we have seen in the growth of the

language

capabilities of the Indian youth during the time when the British ruled

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India.

Consequently

,

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the arrivals

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arrivals

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arrival

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of

tourists

cause increasing

of

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in

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language

experience.

On the other hand

, some people think that the visit of travellers can damage historical complexes. They pollute the

enviroment

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environment

.

In addition

, historical monuments are

also

likely to suffer significant damage from

it

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them

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.

For instance

, the Egyptian government forbade climbing on it

due to

the

possibilty

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possibility

of damage to the Pyramids.

To conclude

, a large number of

tourists

visiting the

country

contributes greatly to the growth of the regional economy and the development of the

language

potensial

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potential

of the population.