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Some people think governments are responsible for people’s health, others believe it’s an individual’s responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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One of the social concerns today relates to the
health
 of
people
.
While
 it is widely believed that
people
 think
governments
 are responsible for
people’s
health
, others believe it’s an individual’s responsibility. In my opinion, needs to have the commitment of the government and individuals, both have a responsibility to help
people’s
health
 better. On the one hand, it is argued that
people
 think
governments
 are responsible for
people’s
health
. The main reason is that
people
 contribute to taxes annually. It is
also
 possible to say that
governments
 use
this
 money to improve facilities, build more hospitals, and more area communities for
people
 can use to exercise and walk in there. One good illustration of
this
 is when having many hospitals,
people
 can be in ambulances quickly, and avoid dangerously. Another reason is only
governments
 can release laws to protect and halt activities illegal relates to
people’s
health
.
On the other hand
, it is strongly believed by others that others believe it’s an individual’s responsibility.
People
 often have
this
 opinion because individuals need to protect themself, they need to initiative join sports clubs, exercise, diet healthily and care for their
health
. A particularly good example here is me, I usually walk every morning and play football, volleyball, and badminton at the weekend as a way to improve my
health
, the government can’t call me to wake up in the morning and control my habit, I need initiative. In conclusion, both government and individuals need to be responsible for
people’s
health
 Personally, I tend to believe that an individual being healthier will contribute to a country's development.
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