the two maps below show an island before and after construction of some tourist facilities.

the two maps below show an island before and after construction of some tourist facilities.
These two maps show the same
island
, the first map is before
construction
and the second is after
construction
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the construction
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of
same
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the same
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travelling facilities.   Before the
construction
, we can only see the sea, the beach and some trees
in
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on
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the
island
. And after the
construction
, added swimming areas, accommodation linked by footpaths and other related travelling facilities.   Looking at the map before it was built, there was a large open space on the
island
. After it was built, the restaurant and reception were added to the open space, which was connected by vehicle tracks and led to the pier. Tourists can take a sailboat tour, and there are many houses around the reception area as accommodation. The position of the trees after
construction
remains the same as before
construction
.   In general, after the
construction
, there is a great change compared with before the
construction
, but after the
construction
island
is more suitable for tourism development.
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  • island
  • before and after
  • construction
  • tourist facilities
  • maps
  • changes
  • comparison
  • description
  • implications
  • personal opinion
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