the two maps below show an island before and after construction of some tourist facilities.
These two maps show the same
island
, the first map is before construction
and the second is after construction
of Correct article usage
the construction
same
travelling facilities.
Before the Correct article usage
the same
construction
, we can only see the sea, the beach and some trees in
the Change preposition
on
island
. And after the construction
, added swimming areas, accommodation linked by footpaths and other related travelling facilities.
Looking at the map before it was built, there was a large open space on the island
. After it was built, the restaurant and reception were added to the open space, which was connected by vehicle tracks and led to the pier. Tourists can take a sailboat tour, and there are many houses around the reception area as accommodation. The position of the trees after construction
remains the same as before construction
.
In general, after the construction
, there is a great change compared with before the construction
, but after the construction
island
is more suitable for tourism development.Submitted by dearjenfrombangkok on
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