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The plans show information about the first floor of a library in 1998 and the same area now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The two pictures compare changes in the layout of the first ground in a library from 1998 to now. We can see that the new structure of a library makes a number of changes to the ground floor of the particular area, and some parts are cut off as time goes by. There are no plans to change the entrance. The most noticeable change from the previous to the existing floor plan is that the book display and study table are integrated into one bigger book display. The area of chairs turns smaller and is moved to the left of the first floor, which replaced the previous zone of computer. A room of reference books and maps is turned into a new coffee table. And in the lower left corner, people can find local reference books
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 1995. But now,
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 place is full of new books. The librarian's desk and photocopies are controverted into the self-service desk and study room respectively. The only area that has no change is the entrance.
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