In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this .
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people
in some countries prefer to have a gap year before they start a graduate program at Use synonyms
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for work or travelling.
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are challenged by the lack of life experience and numerous future students can not choose the right profession for themselves. In Use synonyms
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unqualified job can give them money to cover their basic expenditures and Use synonyms
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to think about life-goal plans. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, they can be employed and travel at the same Linking Words
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This
strategy allows young Linking Words
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to deal with stress caused by the importance of choosing a professional field and contributes to the good mental health of future graduates.
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On the other hand
, a gap year can cause some problems for young Linking Words
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. A long-term vacation before studying, at some point, could have a negative impact on Use synonyms
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education at Linking Words
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management.
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To conclude
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essay agrees that a decision to have a gap year may have some advantages and disadvantages at the same Linking Words
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However
, the performance of a student at the Linking Words
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mostly depends on encouragement to study and self-discipline. Anyway, travelling and working before a graduate program can be a good chance to have life experience and benefit mental health.Use synonyms
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