The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city center from 2003-2012.

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The chart illustrates the differences that have happened in three various types of

crime

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(burglary, car theft and robbery) in Newport city centre between 2003 and 2012.

overall

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, burglary was the highest

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until 2007. it recorded the highest

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in 2004,

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car theft came in second until 2007. it began to be the most

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of three that happened in the city.

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, the robbery came

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with the lowest

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and even the most stable. First of all,

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break in

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was the most common one and it started to arise and reached its peak in 2004 with 3800 accidents.

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it dropped until achieved the lowest

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in 2008 with 1200 ones. it raised a bit

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and stayed approximately stable.

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, thefts that stole cars started with almost 2800 incidents in 2003 and decreased in 2006 to touch the minimum that was about 2000 and continued rising until 2012. It is obvious that the robbery was not very common in the city as they

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at about 600 numbers and recorded a tiny crease and run to the lowest

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in 2008 at 500 crimes.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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Some countries are strungling with increase in crime rates. Some berlive that having more police on the street is bestway to reduce and combat crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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