Our personalities are predefined as a result of our genes before we are born and there is nothing can be done to change our character traits. To what extent do you agree?

#personalities #predefined #genes #change #character #traits

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

It is generally acknowledged that

people

Use synonyms

are born with

Change the article

show examples

unic

Correct your spelling

unique

complex of genes that determines

human's

Correct article usage

a human's

show examples

character in the bud

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

that

Correct word choice

apply

show examples

it can not be changed.

While

Linking Words

a lot of

people

Use synonyms

support that statement, I only partly agree with it in view of

Correct article usage

the

show examples

huge impact of living conditions on human

life

Use synonyms

that define personalities.

To begin

Linking Words

with, there are a lot of examples when one family consist of ultimately different members in terms of personal traits. It is quite common that children do not inherit anything from their parents and their behaviour seems absolutely strange. In my opinion, there is a range of reasons for

this

Linking Words

phenomenon. First of all, our character forms from childhood when we learn simple rules of living

such

Linking Words

as communication and adoption. At

this

Linking Words

stage, the company that

people

Use synonyms

choose and the ambience of the house where the person lives have an impact on their behaviour habits in the future.

Moreover

Linking Words

, as

people

Use synonyms

mature and get wise, their worldviews is changing under

circumstances

Correct article usage

the circumstances

show examples

they are living in. The process of personality formation lasts all the

life

Use synonyms

and is firmly related to the

overall

Linking Words

condition of

life

Use synonyms

On the other hand

Linking Words

, it is should be noted that some types of behaviour go through generations and enshrine in genes that can not be modified. Most

Change preposition

show examples

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

examples of it are scientifically proven, so it should not be denied. There is

Remove the article

apply

show examples

some

Correct quantifier usage

apply

show examples

tendency in

people

Use synonyms

's characters that might be inherited, but it is clear that

this

Linking Words

factor is only 10 per cent of the entire person's traits because all

people

Use synonyms

would be the same. In conclusion,

this

Linking Words

is partly true that our personalities

forms

Change the verb form

form

show examples

from genes to some extent, but I am absolutely convinced that the most influence on characters has our

life

Use synonyms

circumstances, friend and childhood.

Submitted by fgadzievaa on Mon Apr 24 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

7
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

303 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

5
band
Some people think that to ensure a happier society, there should be only a small difference in the earninings between the poorest and the richest members. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today's world, there are many economic and mental health issues. Some folks suggest that to tackle these problems, there should be a policy in nations which the wealth of the poorest and the richest citizens have a little gap. I totally disagree with this statement, as it causes people to lose their need to work hard and to eliminate their hopes for finantial growth.
6
band
Director and mangers are mostly older people. Some people believe young people will become better leaders. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people think that young people will become better leaders,whilst directors and managers in general are older people. I partly agree with this statement that young people should be in the first place.
5
band
Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the negative impacts on society and family life?
In recent years, the time when people have children has frequently become later, and there is a specific factor why they decide to do so. Furthermore, this movement gives society and family life disliked effects.
4.5
band
The pictures below show how tea is produced. They also illustrate the process of making a cup of tea. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The process illustrates the production of tea and making a cup of tea. In general, there are 15 stages in the whole process of producing tea, beginning with the growth in countries and ending with the consumption.
7.5
band
An old car was left on the street near your street several weeks ago. The car is now causing a problem for residents. Write a letter to the Council. In your letter: - Describe the car; - Outline the problems it is causing; - Tell the Council what you want them to do about it. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Councilor,
My name is Alex and I am the one who lives in the area that you maintain. The reason for my letter to you is that someone parked a car in the middle of a road in our neighbourhood a few weeks ago. As an outcome, this situation creates lots of uncomfortable issues for the local people.

Our personalities are predefined as a result of our genes before we are born and there is nothing can be done to change our character traits. To what extent do you agree?

Some people think that to ensure a happier society, there should be only a small difference in the earninings between the poorest and the richest members. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Director and mangers are mostly older people. Some people believe young people will become better leaders. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the negative impacts on society and family life?

The pictures below show how tea is produced. They also illustrate the process of making a cup of tea. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.