Our personalities are predefined as a result of our genes before we are born and there is nothing can be done to change our character traits. To what extent do you agree?

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It is generally acknowledged that

people

are born with

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complex of genes that determines

human's

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character in the bud

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it can not be changed.

While

a lot of

people

support that statement, I only partly agree with it in view of

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huge impact of living conditions on human

life

that define personalities.

To begin

with, there are a lot of examples when one family consist of ultimately different members in terms of personal traits. It is quite common that children do not inherit anything from their parents and their behaviour seems absolutely strange. In my opinion, there is a range of reasons for

this

phenomenon. First of all, our character forms from childhood when we learn simple rules of living

such

as communication and adoption. At

this

stage, the company that

people

choose and the ambience of the house where the person lives have an impact on their behaviour habits in the future.

Moreover

, as

people

mature and get wise, their worldviews is changing under

circumstances

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they are living in. The process of personality formation lasts all the

life

and is firmly related to the

overall

condition of

life

On the other hand

, it is should be noted that some types of behaviour go through generations and enshrine in genes that can not be modified. Most

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examples of it are scientifically proven, so it should not be denied. There is

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tendency in

people

's characters that might be inherited, but it is clear that

this

factor is only 10 per cent of the entire person's traits because all

people

would be the same. In conclusion,

this

is partly true that our personalities

forms

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from genes to some extent, but I am absolutely convinced that the most influence on characters has our

life

circumstances, friend and childhood.

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