Fresh water has become a golbal problem for the world.What are the causes of it? what meaaures government and individual should take to resolve to the problem? Give reasons and e.g for your answers

Presently, it is an important issue to shortage
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water
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for the
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world
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. There are many causes of it. Government and
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should cooperate to solve the trouble. In
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water
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is the most essential
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for
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human being's life. Humans can not live without
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. Nowadays majority of the
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find it difficult to use fresh
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in order to be
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over the world.
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, it causes serious illnesses and poverty.
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,
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suffer from
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African
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languish in
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of
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water
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case, most
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people
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even children died
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without fresh
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authorities and individuals should work to resolve the problem together. Governments ought to teach
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population
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the population
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how to save
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water
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. They should use television, journals newspapers and internet sites to provide necessary information to the
population
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. Individuals should cooperate with
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to improve the situation. They should not waste of the
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water
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people
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live in urban areas. We know that
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who inhabit
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cities utilize more
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and waste
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them. They should reduce to use
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water
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of water
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All in all, we can give many examples because of reducing fresh
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.
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The government
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and individuals ought to work together to relieve the situation.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainability
  • Irrigation
  • Water scarcity
  • Contaminants
  • Desalination
  • Drought
  • Water conservation
  • Aquifers
  • Water footprint
  • Rainwater harvesting
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