A cafe near your home put some chairs and tables on the pavement for customers. This creates a problem for you.Write a letter to the manager of the cafe to complain about this matter. In your letter, -Describe the problem -Explain how it affects you -Say what you will do if this matter is not resolved

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Dear Arun, I am writing

this

letter to complain about an issue that I am encountering for the

last

couple of weeks. As you are aware, I live in proximity to your cafe and I need to pass by your cafe to get to my work.

However

, because of the patio set up on the pavement hinders my way. For the

last

week, I tried to use the other road but it took me more time to arrive at my destination than using

this

road.

Also

, I feel hesitant to walk on the pathway

due to

the crowd and I need to walk on the main road which is dangerous.

Therefore

, it would be best if you move your furniture inside the cafe and empty the footpath area.

Moreover

, if no action is taken within a week

then

unfortunately I will have to report

this

to the police as it is

also

illegal to do business on the pathways. Looking forward to hearing back from you Yours Sincerely, Visha Singh

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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

170 words

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