A cafe near your home put some chairs and tables on the pavement for customers. This creates a problem for you.Write a letter to the manager of the cafe to complain about this matter. In your letter, -Describe the problem -Explain how it affects you -Say what you will do if this matter is not resolved

Dear Arun, I am writing
this
letter to complain about an issue that I am encountering for the
last
couple of weeks. As you are aware, I live in proximity to your cafe and I need to pass by your cafe to get to my work.
However
, because of the patio set up on the pavement hinders my way. For the
last
week, I tried to use the other road but it took me more time to arrive at my destination than using
this
road.
Also
, I feel hesitant to walk on the pathway
due to
the crowd and I need to walk on the main road which is dangerous.
Therefore
, it would be best if you move your furniture inside the cafe and empty the footpath area.
Moreover
, if no action is taken within a week
then
unfortunately I will have to report
this
to the police as it is
also
illegal to do business on the pathways. Looking forward to hearing back from you Yours Sincerely, Visha Singh
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