Some people believe that the country would benefit a lot from a large number of young people who enter into university; however, others think that the large number of people receiving the education of university only leads to graduate unemployment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is said that if there are a lot of

university

-graduated people, the country will be more thriving.

In contrast

, others see that as a useless way which will finish with more idle youngers in the future. I reckon that both are right in one way or another. I will explain my opinion in more

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in

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essay. First and foremost, a

university

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an inevitable demand to get employment at local or international companies. As most graduated students are not able to start their own businesses immediately after graduating.

For instance

, after I graduated from

university

and applied for work, all the companies I went to asked about my educated level. If I had not had one, I would not be able to work for seven years.

On the other hand

, some jobs have not required a

university

degree to get into or even to master them. As the nature of the

job

may need physical skills and it does not make sense to ask the employee to have a college certification to take the

job

.

In addition

, even though we live in a technology age, we are still able to acquire new knowledge without going to any college.

For example

, one of my friends who had not finished their academic education started his own

job

and he is now a successful entrepreneur.

To sum up

, a

university

degree could be an urgent demand for some people and help them to find a

job

fast, it will be the opposite for others as they will lose their time and ambition after staying unemployed after they get it. The pivotal point is to be useful to the society we live in with or without any certifications.