The given charts give information about the number of students at university in the UK from 1991 to 2001, government spending and the types of family economic background they came from in 1991.
The graphs illustrate the proportion of
students
depends
on family economic background, how many Wrong verb form
depending
students
are studying at university in the UK and the government spending on every student.
Overall
, the government and family
put a lot of effort and money into Fix the agreement mistake
families
universities'
education in 1991, Change noun form
universities
while
the percentage of students
attending university was still low.
Firstly
, the proportion of students
by family economic background with middle income took the first place with 62% in 1991. The percentage of students
in families with high income and low income were
30% and 8% respectively.
Change the verb form
was
Secondly
, the number of students
at university in the UK increased significantly between 1991 and 1999, starting from 1000000 students
and peaked
at 2100000 Wrong verb form
peaking
students
in 1999. This
number slightly decreased from 2100000 to 2000000 in the next 3 years. On the other hand
, the amount of government spending on each student dropped sharply from 6500 pounds to around 4800 pounds between 1991 and 1996. This
amount was almost unchanged from 1996 to 2001.Submitted by dotien.st on
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