Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.

Is it a good idea to teach adolescents at school how to be
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good
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?
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with that concept. Young people should be aware of how many responsibilities they will have after having a baby and how important is to be able to afford all that children may need.
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, it is really important to know since we are really young that being a good mother or a father means having a huge amount of responsibilities.
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one of my best
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became a mother
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, she doesn't have enough time for her baby , having to be for them every day. The biggest responsibility is educating and teaching them how to be
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good person.
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we have other important responsibilities
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as cooking healthy meals, making some free time for them and helping with their homework.
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, another significant reason why we should be taught at school about
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matter is that we
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need economic stability.
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, when
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became a mother
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was not aware of how important that was, so
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really had a rough
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if it was not for the help
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recieved
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from my parents
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am not sure how
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could have done it. That means, having enough money for their health, education and food.
To conclude
, it is of great importance to be aware since our childhood all what a good parent means, that will make people take the decision of being a parent in the right moment of their life.
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