The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart illustrates how solar panels can be used to provide
electricity
for domestic use in the year between 2000-2006.
Overall
, solar electricity
is mostly used for Handheld games
, while
less amount of electricity
was used for online games
.
In 2000, solar electricity
was only used for handheld games
and console games
, which were almost $ 6 bn
and $ 11 bn
respectively. After 1 year, the solar panels providing electricity
for handheld games
$ 2 bn
climbed and the use of solar electricity
occurred for online games
. Although
, the usage of solar electricity
in console games
slightly decreased from around $ 5 bn
to approximately $ 3 bn
throughout the period.
Furthermore
, solar energy used in handheld games
increase continuously from $ 12 bn
and reached its peak at the end
of the period, which was almost $ 18 bn
. In 2000, $ 1 bn
solar energy was used in mobile phone games
and online games
. Moreover
, in 2006, the need for solar energy in mobile phone games
and online games
raised, the former was $ 7 bn
and the latter was $9 bn
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, games, bn with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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