The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
diagram shows the completed process of glass
recycling. Overall
we can see that there are six stages to the man-made process.
The first
step
is that the glass
is put into a special recycling bin in the office or a house. After the material is collected and delivered by a truck to a treatment plant. The third step
is the glass
goes through a washing and sterilising machine. This
is an important step
in the recycling chain because it allows the glass
to be used as many times as it is needed. The next following step
is glass
is crushed and melted in order to mould into any shape at the special moulding machine at the plant. When the new glass
is ready, it is, finally
, taken to the supermarket - it is delivered from the plant directly to shop shelves.
Overall
, the graphic represents all steps of the process that goes in a circle and can be repeated many times.Submitted by kuralay.abylgazina on
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