At the present time the population of some countries including a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

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rose up increasingly compared to the elderly

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in some nations. In

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essay I will discuss how, to my opinion, the fact that the majority of the global

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becomes younger, actually leads to a negative phenomenon, and how the disadvantages outweigh the advantages, contrasting to what is believed by some.

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can have positive effects, mainly because of the following reasons:

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adapt to futuristic technologies quicker than older

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, they have ambition, and motivation for success, equipped with a sharp mind they invent new technologies which

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to bring progress to their countries. In Japan

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, the amount of young

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is extremely high than the mature

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fact affects the field of industry and economics in a positive way,

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Japan counts as one of the leading countries in every aspect today.

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, young

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will always be preferable as a force of work. It doesn’t really matter what the type of work is, they will have a better chance to apply for a position, than a

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, no matter how much experience he has.

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has an impact on the

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's economic growth. Allegedly, it looks like the advantages outweigh the disadvantages, but in my opinion, it is the opposite way around, the decreasing negative growth of the mature

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has a worrying effect on the future of those nations, especially because of two reasons.

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represent the traditions and cultural

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of their

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. Without them, the cultural

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will fade away, and among that, cultural symbols and ceremonies will vanish too. There won’t be any legacy left to share only through museums that will document stories and

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that once lived.

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, there are only a few holocaust survivors left in the world. Once they will pass away there is a big concern that some of Israel's cultural

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will die too.

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the hands and not the brain, is disappearing as well, since the younger generation wishes to work in the more prestige industries and professions, including high-tech, software, accounts, law, machine learning and more,

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has a negative effect on a country since there won’t be an answer for those requests any longer. In conclusion, the young

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the benefits of progress and wealth, but alongside, sadly contribute to the absence of their

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, everyone will be the same eventually, and I feel that

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needs to change drastically in a matter to prevent that, for the sake of those countries future.