Write a letter to the manager of the HR department of a company requesting information about the interview that you attended but still waiting for results. In your letter, describe the position you applied for why you think the interview went well why you need the result of the interview Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I writing
this
letter to inform you that, I gave an interview about a month ago, but I have not received any mail regarding that interview Linking Words
result
.
I applied for the Quality Assurance position at the Oakville location of your company which required graduation, my qualifications match that post. Because Mr. John appreciated me, I believe the interview went well, he was happy with my answer and the skills that I showed him and even he informed me that I would be on the top of the selection lists. I want to know about the Use synonyms
result
whether positive or negative, because I have received a job offer from another company and I need to give them an answer within Use synonyms
this
week, so if you provide me with the Linking Words
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, I can take my decision ahead.
Could you please declare the Use synonyms
result
as soon as possible? Looking forward to hearing from you.
Your Faithfully,
AnkitUse synonyms
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coherence cohesion
Consider organizing your letter in a clearer structure by using paragraphs effectively: one for the purpose of the letter, one for the details about the interview, and one for the urgency and request.
task achievement
Ensure to use formal tone consistently and avoid grammatical mistakes such as 'I writing' which should be 'I am writing'.
task achievement
You have successfully described the position you applied for and why you believe the interview went well.
coherence cohesion
You have clearly communicated the urgency of needing the interview result.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing of the letter are appropriate and formal.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite