Some company sponsors sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think that it is good, while others think there are disavantages to this. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many corporations invest huge

amount

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of money in different sports in order to become sponsors and

enchance theire

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enhance their

recognition among people. There are two groups of individuals. The first group argued that it is good.

However

, the second group claimed

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there are many drawbacks. From my perspective, I support these two groups. So, in

this

essay

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I will

further

explore

this

thought-provoking question. On the one hand, there are a lot of benefits for

sport

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teams and

athletes

in general.

To begin

with, cooperation with these companies

give

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tremendous opportunities to improve

status

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the status

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of

team

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and accelerate

athletes

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athletes'

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preparation

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for competition.

In other words

, sponsorship

provide

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a big amount of money.

Hence

,

team

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the team

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can spend it on various

sport

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facilities and all useful stuff for the

sport

.

That

is

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mean

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athletes

become more professional and successful.

As a result

, it provides better recognition and

ability

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to participate in more elite competitions.

Furthermore

,

sportsman

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sportsmen

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can focus only on

sport

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sports

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and train more

instead

of

find

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additional

way

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of earning .

On the other hand

, we cannot underestimate

drawbacks

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in

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the

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sponsorship. Sponsors can promote harmful things

for

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human beings.

For instance

, different beverages or even cigarettes and alcohol.

In contrast

, people trust

to

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this

brend

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breed

and believe that it is not damaging for the reason that they reckon that

athletes

cannot promote bad things.

Conversely

,

athletes

do not care about it considering the fact that they get

a huge sums

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of money.

In addition

, sponsors who invest

into

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teams or

sport

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sports

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event

they

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think that they can manipulate them and do whatever they want.

Although

, they can cause disastrous

situation

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situations

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. In conclusion, there are many advantages for

athletes

who have a sponsorship. Despite that, the advertisements can lead

harmful

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consequences for viewers or fans of

particular

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a particular

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team.