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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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In the opinion of
people
 who believe that
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professionals
 should only
work
 where they were trained, they have the view of communitarianism. These
people
 believe that if someone has special skills or talents, they have to use them for a better nation or group. For them, the objectives of the group are more important than the individuals’ own values or goals. So they want the
professionals
 who are talented and
skillful
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 to
work
 for their group, not for others including
professionals
 themselves.
On the other hand
, in the opinion of
people
 who believe contrary to them have the view of liberalism. They value the individuals’ needs more than anything else
,
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 if those needs do not give damages to other
people
. They believe the
country
 where
professionals
work
 is depending on their
favor
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, and it is not a thing that other
people
 can restrict. In my opinion, I agree with the
people
 who have liberalism more.
First,
professionals
 became
skillful
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 thanks to their self-encouragement not because of their
country
. Countries might support them,
however
, their
self striving
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 is the major reason that makes them
professionals
. So there is no reason that they need to remain in their
country
.
Second,
if they go to another
country
 for
work
, they can be treated better and learn more things than remaining in their countries. No one can have
professionals
 give up the opportunities. In conclusion, Because of these reasons, I believe that
professionals
 should be free to choose which
country
 to
work
 in.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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