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The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, *20…, and future projections for 2025.

The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, *20…, and future projections for 2025.
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The given illustration gives data on the number of Southland's main exports, namely international tourism, meat and dairy
products
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, in 2000, and 2023 and it is included
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 future forecast for 2025. In general, it can be clearly seen from the presented chart that it is predicted that the export of international tourism will grow,
whereas
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 the transport of meat
products
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 will drop. Looking at the details, it can be highlighted that the shipping of dairy
products
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 in Southland increased gradually from 7
billion
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pounds
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 to approximately 10 in 2023.
However
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, it is predicted that it will experience a slight drop to 9,5
billion
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pounds
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 in 2025. Concerning international tourism, it rose from 8.000.000.000 to 9 one's
pounds
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 and it is forecasted that the export continues to increase. As regards
to
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meat
products
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, it started at 6
billion
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pounds
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, fell and it will drop to 5
billion
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 in 2025 in Southland.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words products, billion, pounds with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Exports, main exports, projections, trends, significant changes, increased, decreased, speculate, external factors, global demand, technological advancements, trade policies, agriculture, technology, manufacturing, economic implications, employment, GDP, economic growth, global economic trends
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