The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas.

The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas.
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The bar graph illustrates the amount of carbon dioxide emitted per person in four different countries from 1967 to 2007.
Overall
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, carbon dioxide
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in Italy and Portugal followed an upward trend,
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Sweden and the UK followed a downward trend. In 1967, over 8 metric
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of carbon dioxide was emitted in Sweden, after which
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increased and reached a high of above 10 metric
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in 1977 before falling back to a low of under 6 metric
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in 2007. In the UK, there was a gradual decrease from around 11 metric
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in 1967 to about 9 metric
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in 2007. Turning to Italy and Portugal, only 1 metric tonne of CO2 was emitted in Portugal (1967), and there was a considerable rise of around 5 metric
tonnes
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in 2007. The average CO2
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were almost 4 metric
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in Italy in 1967, which was followed by a significant rise of above 7 metric
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in 2007. It is noticeable that the amount of CO2
emissions
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was the same in Sweden and Portugal in 2007.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words emissions, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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