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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding cahnge. Others, however think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

#people #lives #cahnge #change
Some
people
 like
risks
 more than other
people
, so they may quickly
change
 their opinion, work or
life
. But some
people
 like stable
life
 more than others, so they may not want to
change
 almost anything in their
life
. In my opinion,
although
 some
risks
 are small, they are beneficial for catching the goals in our lives. Because of ,that we must be open to
change
 in one way or another.
Firstly
, developing technologies are rapidly changing our world and It is an impact on our lives. Some
people
 may want to stand or stop all
this
change
 and stay stable. For ,example so many
people
 don’t catch new technologies about mobile phones. There are too many changes and developments for only a phone.
Besides
change
 and development sometimes force too much on work, education and lifestyles.
Therefore
, it is necessary to learn and
change
 something new in our company, school or
life
. That can be exhausting and maybe
people
 can not
change
 something necessary themselves and avoid
change
.
According to
 some
people
 who like
risks
,
change
 is a risk that must be taken. It looks right from their point of view.
For example
, someone who wants to study at a university in abroad away from their own family. It seems
that is
 not a challenge but an opportunity to add new benefits into own personality, take action and take
risks
. After some actions like that,
change
 is a good thing and a part of
life
 for a kind of person. In conclusion, making
change
 is sometimes easy, and sometimes difficult for different
people
. No matter how hard the world forces us,
change
 is important for ourselves and for our development.
In addition
 , there is a sparkle in every small
change
.
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