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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding cahnge. Others, however think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

#people #lives #cahnge #change
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Some
people
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 like
risks
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 more than other
people
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, so they may quickly
change
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 their opinion, work or
life
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. But some
people
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 like stable
life
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 more than others, so they may not want to
change
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 almost anything in their
life
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. In my opinion,
although
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 some
risks
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 are small, they are beneficial for catching the goals in our lives. Because of ,that we must be open to
change
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 in one way or another.
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, developing technologies are rapidly changing our world and It is an impact on our lives. Some
people
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 may want to stand or stop all
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change
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 and stay stable. For ,example so many
people
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 don’t catch new technologies about mobile phones. There are too many changes and developments for only a phone.
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change
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 and development sometimes force too much on work, education and lifestyles.
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, it is necessary to learn and
change
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 something new in our company, school or
life
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. That can be exhausting and maybe
people
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 can not
change
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 something necessary themselves and avoid
change
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.
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 some
people
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 who like
risks
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,
change
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 is a risk that must be taken. It looks right from their point of view.
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, someone who wants to study at a university in abroad away from their own family. It seems
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 not a challenge but an opportunity to add new benefits into own personality, take action and take
risks
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. After some actions like that,
change
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 is a good thing and a part of
life
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 for a kind of person. In conclusion, making
change
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 is sometimes easy, and sometimes difficult for different
people
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. No matter how hard the world forces us,
change
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 is important for ourselves and for our development.
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 , there is a sparkle in every small
change
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.
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