Nowadays parents are forcing their ward to do part time jobs in their free time . Write the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomena.

These days competition has increased in every field . So , skills play
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role in
this
situation.
Parental
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are
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encorage
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encourage
encouraged
their children to do
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internships
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and enhance their knowledge.
In
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this
phenomena
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have pros and cons,
therefore
, I will discuss
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the ensuing
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paragraphs
.
To begin
with , there
are
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plathora
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plethora
advantage of
part
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part-time
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time
work
.
Firstly
,
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the student
a student
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student
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students
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will learn
fincial
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financial
management and they
also
now
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know
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parents struggle to earn money.
For example
, in
usa
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USA
, when
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a child
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child
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children
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become 18 years old,
that
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they earn money and support
family
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the family
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.
Secondly
, when youth do
part
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part-time
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time
job
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jobs
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, it will
rise
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raise
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their confidence .
Thirdly
,
books
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book
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knowlegde
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knowledge
is very limited and
th eory
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theory
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based
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is based
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. Students would not gain practical
knowlegde
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knowledge
in the classroom .
As a result
,
internshipwill
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internship will
be
rise
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raise
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their intelligence.
For instance
, recently
collage
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college
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added rules for learners that folks who study in
last
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year of the course,
they
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work
with companies as
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interns
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and
then
to
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apply
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give degree
certificate
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certificates
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.
On the other hand
, there are
also
same
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some
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drawbacks . Nowadays , the ratio of mental and physical health issues has
been
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increased because children can not
work
parallely
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parallelly
parallel
. To illustrate ,
the
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survey of
time
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of
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, 68% of youth are suffered
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from health
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issues.
Moreover
,
student
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the student
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can not focus on their study, it
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on their grade. In conclusion , in the
competition
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era, people need to
equired
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acquire
advanced skills and experience .So, it is
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the
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best way to learn field knowledge in
part
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part-time
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time
work
.
Similarly
, theoretical understanding is
also
as important.
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