The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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health

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is one of the most important

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thing

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in our lives. It does not matter how much money you have

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your wallet, more often

physical

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statement is something

what

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you cannot buy.

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, our generation

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the society, which is have worse quality of

health

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that

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other generations.

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this

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, I would assert, that in the future population would have

lower

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health

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average.

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, one of the most

health

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decrease factors would be our unhealthy lifestyle, especially teenagers. Nowadays,

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society forgot about the importance of

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sport

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activity and healthy nutrition. Increased consumption of fast food we can reveal by the fast

grow

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of food courts in the streets, shopping

centers

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and

others

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possible places for them.

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, despite the warnings about the consequences of fast food, there

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so many

adds

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and posters around the world which is provoсe and promote

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unhealthy nutrition. Sport activity now is

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like

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burden

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a burden

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for a person and every time they forgot choose stay home and watch

series

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instead

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of 30 minutes workout or just a simple walk outside. The most important, understand that

healthy

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lifestyle

never

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cannot be a burden, he is always has a benefit for us.

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increased usage of

alcohol

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.

Alcohol

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abuse,

one

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of the most dangerous and

wide ranging

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diseases nowadays.

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, the problem seems much bigger when we realize, that in many countries, usage of

alcohol

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have

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many rules,

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: we cannot drink and buy alcoholic goods under the age of 20; the time of buying alcoholic products is limited. And despite

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boose

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is still grow

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up.

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, the problems increased of unhealthy

lifestyle

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lifestyles

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and

alcohol

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abuse around the world, have a big impact

for

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us nowadays and will have in the future.

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is

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clearly shows, that

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future generations would

be have

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lower

health

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than us.