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The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country betwewn 1920 and 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country betwewn 1920 and 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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As an introduction, these line graphs illustrate the percentage of electrical home appliances and the amount of time allocated for
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household works in a country, between the period of 1920 to 2019.
Overall
, there was a significant increase
of
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 the numbers of electrical
equipments
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equipment
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 during that period, which led to a dramatic reduction
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 the time spent
for
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 daily household duties.
Although
 in 1920, the percentage of refrigerators was almost zero, it rose dramatically up to 100% in 1980
,
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 and remained the same
thereafter
.
Moreover
, the number of
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vacuum
 cleaners, which was 30% in 1920, increased considerably up to 100% in
year
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 2000.
Eventhough
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Even though
 in 1920, the most popular product was the washing
mechine
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machine
, which was 40%, it increased slowly reaching about 75% in 2019 and remained the least available item comparatively.
Lastly
, the total number of working hours has
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dropped from 50 to 10 hours per week from 1920 to 2019.
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Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • electrical appliances
  • household
  • technological advancements
  • accessibility
  • ownership
  • sociocultural factors
  • economic factors
  • time management
  • efficiency
  • lifestyle change
  • pattern
  • anomaly
  • prediction
  • innovation
  • labor-saving devices
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