The world should have only one government rather than a national government for each country. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disatvantages?
Having one government for all the
world
is better than having one for each country. The huge advantage of this
idea is that there would not be many problems because of the disagreements between the countries
governments. Change noun form
country's
countries'
Overall
, in this
essay
I will be mentioning the advantages and disadvantages of having a singular government for all the earth.
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,essay
First,
there have been multiple conflicts in the past regarding politics and misunderstandings between terriories
. Having just one Correct your spelling
territories
governement
that leads Correct your spelling
government
all
the Correct determiner usage
apply
world
would be really convinient
since all human beings would have the same rules, Correct your spelling
convenient
rigths
, and most important, the same structure. Not only that but, there would be a decrease Correct your spelling
rights
of
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in
belic
conflicts between the presidents and armies because of the different ideologies. Change the capitalization
Belic
This
is because all the citizens around the world
are going to have the exact same way of living and presidents would not be involved with persons who lead other territories. This
would create a peacfull enviornment
. Correct your spelling
peaceful environment
For example
, from now on, when a law is implied there are not going to be males and females complaining about why that law was made because they will recognize that it is something the whole population is going through, not only them.
On the other hand
, there would be various disadvantages if a single government is created for all humans. For instance
, a wide problem is going to surge when we decide who the governor will be. There will be thousands of people applying to
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for
this
job since it is a huge political position that carries a lot of responsability
. Correct your spelling
responsibility
This
idea that can be something good could also
cause a lot of conflicts not only between the countries but also
between the individuals. Multiple people will look for this
important position and an issue will emerge when the population sees who will be serving as a world
boss. For example
, many terrorist attacks can occur because someone migth
try to murder someone seeking to eliminate Correct your spelling
might
he
or Correct pronoun usage
him
she
from the competition.
Change the pronoun
her
To sum up
, having a single individual who rules the entire world
could be really convinient
for some families but not for others. We will never know how the boys and girls are going to act because Correct your spelling
convenient
this
is a solution that has never been proposed. Still, it is very likely that in the future we are going to face something similar to this
and that is
why we should all be prepered
for everything.Correct your spelling
prepared
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...
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