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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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It is predicted that
people
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 can read everything online without spending any money, up to the point where nobody will purchase
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newspaper
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newspapers
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 or
books
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 again.
This
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 essay will examine why it is unlikely to
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 free options to every existing reading
materials
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. In terms of the possibility of free reading online, it can be based on two following reasons.
Firstly
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, the rapid improvements of technologies usually replace conventional method, as it tends to
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 digitization. It is probable that
people
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 will no longer
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 in
physic
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books
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 because they
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 to modern facilities, especially those that are accessible online.
As a result
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, in the next 10 years, the existing
newspaper
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 and
books
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 could entirely be replaced with digital
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in
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on
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 phones or computers.
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, some will argue that they can get any information instantly through the internet as it provides so many reading preferences
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 as related to education, hobbies, and entertainment. To illustrate, most
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educational journals are now accessible
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students
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, some campus gives free access so that their
students
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 can learn effectively.
On the other hand
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, I would argue that the predictions
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 unlikely to be true
under
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 two reasons.
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, in the next 10 years, the
newspaper
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 and
books
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 industry will be able to maintain customer demands because they have
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 target markets.
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, in education, schools and universities will always need
books
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 as a medium of learning because
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 can increase
students
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 understanding more efficiently.
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, some
students
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 perform better
while
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 studying because they have access to
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books
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.
Therefore
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, the continuity of
books
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 will remain unchanged.
Secondly
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, there are many professions that should be taken into consideration when it comes to publishing
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newspaper
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newspapers
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 or
books
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,
such
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 as
the
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writers,
the
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editors, and
the
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journalists. They work extremely hard to produce
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books
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 and
magazine
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magazines
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 and they need
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compensation for
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 tiring jobs.
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, it is difficult to release their products freely on the internet because it can disturb the job market. In conclusion,
people
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 can read everything freely because of the potential
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 technologies and
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the widespread
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of
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information provided online.
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, the constant demand
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newspaper
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newspapers
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 and
books
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 and appreciation towards
specifics
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 jobs will make it difficult to
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people
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 to read without paying.
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