You have recently moved to a new neighbourhood and would like to join a sports centre there. You have found a private sports club. Write a letter to the manager of the sports club. In your letter, introduce yourself say why are you interested in this sports club ask some questions about the club, facilities, membership, costs etc.

#neighbourhood #sports #centre #club #manager #questions #facilities #membership #costs

Dear Sir, My name is Alex and I am writing to you as I need a piece of advice. I have found an advertisement for

this

downtown sports club and would like to ask a few questions. I play tennis on an amateur level and am looking for sports clubs in the closest area to my new home, as I am new to

this

part of the city. I am interested in good quality courts with convenient admission for a new member of

this

community. Especially, I would like to know better about your special offers as a private business, about the main advantages against municipal sports centres around. Could you, please, describe to me the types and conditions of membership programs and what they include?

Also

, I prefer to combine my game sets with strength training, which is why I require gym access.

In addition

this

, the presence of a swimming pool would be an absolute advantage. Do you own parking? I am still not familiar with local parking lots in that area, but it would be great if hold one. I will be grateful to receive all information from you by

this

email. Could I ask you for

this

favour? I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Kind regards, Alex

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