Due to increase use of aeroplane, air pollution is increasing more and more airports are constructed. Some people say that government should reduce air traffic by taxing it heavily. Do you agree or disagree?

In the
last
decade,
air
travel became more popular, and it is a short way to reach their home countries.
Due to
this
fact that there are many airports are building in different locations by authorities. From my point of view that gives a negative impact on
environment
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. I disagree that
government
needs to tax a high amount to pay airlines for reducing the problem. I have discussed
above
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both points in the below paragraphs and the conclusion is deduced. Nowadays, all over the world
facing
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a major problem
is
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pollution, which is gradually
increased
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, because of the population in cities and travel usage is more.
Due to
this
fact that many people are choosing quicker ways to reach their destination. So,
majority
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of people travel by aeroplanes and drastically more and more airports are being constructed. Though
this
is a good
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in
economy
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to
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the
government
, there are some
negetives
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negatives
negative
effect
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to
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the nature and Ozone s3 layer.
Therefore
in many cities
air
purity is drastically reduced.
On the other hand
side, some people
believes
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government
should ask airline authorities to pay higher taxes to reduce the
air
traffic. If, airlines pay high
tax
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, will it really reduce the traffic in the
air
?
For instance
, during the Covid-19 pandemic, no aeroplanes were
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,
consequently
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after
few
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days, there
was
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drastic changes happened in the climate. If airline authorities pay
extra
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amount to the
government
, they will increase ticket fares and it leads to more burden on the
travellars
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travellers
traveller
. After all these, I strongly disagree with the statement that increasing the tax is not beneficial to airports
as well as
travellers. Though there is
air
pollution is happening from the planes, there are alternative ideas
also
available like using natural gas
instead
fuel.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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  • To summarize
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