You recently did a short cookery courses. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter describe what you enjoyed about the course. Say how much cooking you've done since the course. Suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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your cookery course for better teaching. Recently, I attended a local culinary class at your school to upgrade my cooking skill during my summer break. The course was well-structured
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I have learned a lot throughout the whole programme. It was not only enjoyable but
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very beneficial to refine my conventional cooking methods. The most interesting part was that it explained in
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how the different ingredients and flavours can work together to make tasty dishes. Since I completed the class, I started to apply the techniques when I prepared daily meals for my family and received much appreciation since the taste of the dishes was better than before. Even my mother asked me to share the recipes that she wanted to host a
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our relatives and friends. Thank you for
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excellent cookery class and I would like to suggest more courses to offer like baking, fruit curving, and cake decoration that I will not hesitate to sign up
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. I hope you would consider my suggestion and
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new programmes. Yours Faithfully, Ella Khin
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