Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your own opinion.

In today's society, some
people
believed that trying new
things
such
as travelling to new
places
and eating new foods should be more enjoyable,
while
others folks thought that the focus should be on
such
things
which are familiar. In my opinion, I believe that it is good to expand knowledge and experience by visiting different
places
and trying new foods. On the one hand, some
people
think that they should enjoy
more
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it more
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if they are trying new
things
and I agree.
To begin
with, by exploring new
places
individuals can increase their knowledge about
culture
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the culture
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and fashion of different regions.
For instance
, if
people
travel to another country like Italy, Spain, U.K and like that rather than their own country, they should
aware
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be aware
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about
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of
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their sense of clothes and famous
places
.
Additionally
, by going to new restaurants one's can taste new recipes and
aware
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be aware
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about
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of
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the current food market.
Moreover
, some students have
mindset
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the mindset
a mindset
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to eat new foods every month and share
it
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them
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with
audience
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the audience
an audience
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on social media like YouTube and Instagram with full of
recipe
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recipes
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.
Consequently
, other
people
can watch it and try to make it.
On the other hand
, other communities believed that doing
same
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the same
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kind of
things
which are familiar to them is good for them. The first reason is that
those kind
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that kind
those kinds
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of
people
do not want to take any stress or tension by doing other
things
. To illustrate
this
, older communities always travel to
same
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the same
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kind of
places
like Pilgrimage as they are aware of it
since
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for
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many years.
Secondly
, in terms of food, some
people
do not trust on
cooking
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the cooking
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of new restaurants. So, they usually visit
that
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those
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places
which are known
for
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to
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them and have
trust
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trusted
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for a long time. In conclusion,
while
people
may vary their opinions between trying new
things
and staying with familiar
things
, I think that
people
should gain more ideas and knowledge if they try new
things
like
visit
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visiting
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new
places
and going to eat new food.
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  • Novelty
  • Routine
  • Comfort zone
  • Risk-taker
  • Risk-averse
  • Enrichment
  • Personal growth
  • Innovation
  • Creativity
  • Stability
  • Tradition
  • Habit
  • Familiarity
  • Personal enrichment
  • Life stages
  • Fulfilling
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