Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your own opinion.

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In today's society, some
people
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believed that trying new
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such
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as travelling to new
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and eating new foods should be more enjoyable,
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others folks thought that the focus should be on
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things
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which are familiar. In my opinion, I believe that it is good to expand knowledge and experience by visiting different
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and trying new foods. On the one hand, some
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think that they should enjoy
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if they are trying new
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and I agree.
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with, by exploring new
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individuals can increase their knowledge about
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the culture
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and fashion of different regions.
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, if
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travel to another country like Italy, Spain, U.K and like that rather than their own country, they should
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about
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their sense of clothes and famous
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.
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, by going to new restaurants one's can taste new recipes and
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about
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the current food market.
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, some students have
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the mindset
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to eat new foods every month and share
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them
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with
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the audience
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on social media like YouTube and Instagram with full of
recipe
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recipes
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.
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, other
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can watch it and try to make it.
On the other hand
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, other communities believed that doing
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the same
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kind of
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which are familiar to them is good for them. The first reason is that
those kind
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that kind
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of
people
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do not want to take any stress or tension by doing other
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. To illustrate
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, older communities always travel to
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the same
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kind of
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like Pilgrimage as they are aware of it
since
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many years.
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, in terms of food, some
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do not trust on
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the cooking
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of new restaurants. So, they usually visit
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those
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places
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which are known
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to
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them and have
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trusted
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for a long time. In conclusion,
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people
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may vary their opinions between trying new
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and staying with familiar
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, I think that
people
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should gain more ideas and knowledge if they try new
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like
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visiting
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new
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and going to eat new food.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Novelty
  • Routine
  • Comfort zone
  • Risk-taker
  • Risk-averse
  • Enrichment
  • Personal growth
  • Innovation
  • Creativity
  • Stability
  • Tradition
  • Habit
  • Familiarity
  • Personal enrichment
  • Life stages
  • Fulfilling
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