Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your own opinion.
In today's society, some
people
believed that trying new things
such
as travelling to new places
and eating new foods should be more enjoyable, while
others folks thought that the focus should be on such
things
which are familiar. In my opinion, I believe that it is good to expand knowledge and experience by visiting different places
and trying new foods.
On the one hand, some people
think that they should enjoy more
if they are trying new Correct pronoun usage
it more
things
and I agree. To begin
with, by exploring new places
individuals can increase their knowledge about culture
and fashion of different regions. Correct article usage
the culture
For instance
, if people
travel to another country like Italy, Spain, U.K and like that rather than their own country, they should aware
Add a missing verb
be aware
about
their sense of clothes and famous Change preposition
of
places
. Additionally
, by going to new restaurants one's can taste new recipes and aware
Add a missing verb
be aware
about
the current food market. Change preposition
of
Moreover
, some students have mindset
to eat new foods every month and share Add an article
the mindset
a mindset
it
with Correct pronoun usage
them
audience
on social media like YouTube and Instagram with full of Add an article
the audience
an audience
recipe
. Fix the agreement mistake
recipes
Consequently
, other people
can watch it and try to make it.
On the other hand
, other communities believed that doing same
kind of Change the article
the same
things
which are familiar to them is good for them. The first reason is that those kind
of Change the determiner
that kind
those kinds
people
do not want to take any stress or tension by doing other things
. To illustrate this
, older communities always travel to same
kind of Change the article
the same
places
like Pilgrimage as they are aware of it since
many years. Change preposition
for
Secondly
, in terms of food, some people
do not trust on cooking
of new restaurants. So, they usually visit Add an article
the cooking
that
Correct pronoun usage
those
places
which are known for
them and have Change preposition
to
trust
for a long time.
In conclusion, Wrong verb form
trusted
while
people
may vary their opinions between trying new things
and staying with familiar things
, I think that people
should gain more ideas and knowledge if they try new things
like visit
new Wrong verb form
visiting
places
and going to eat new food.Submitted by writing7 on
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