Express your overall enjoyment of last week’s event. Explain why each potluck dish needs a list of ingredients. Describe how the potluck could be differently organized next year.

Dear Canada Day community picnic organizer, Thank you for the wonderful

event

last

weekend. I had an enjoyable time interacting with the community on

such

an important celebration in Canada. I noticed on the day that participants did not include a

list

of

ingredients

for the dishes they brought to the potluck. There are individuals including myself who have some food allergies

such

as those related to nuts and seafood. The allergies can in some cases be fatal which is why a

list

of

ingredients

would be helpful to better assist individuals to make the right food choices based on their allergies. May I suggest that for the

event

next year,

that

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participants are requested to supply a

list

of

ingredients

to go with the dishes they bring to the potluck to avoid any issues that may occur from an individual eating a tainted item that may aggravate their food allergy

.

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I believe that having the

list

of

ingredients

will be widely received and will mean that people can be more involved in the

event

and try the various dishes without risking their health. Thank you for your consideration and I look forward to another wonderful

event

next year.