Some people think that charity organizations should only offer help to people of their own country. But others believe that these organizations should give aid to people in great need wherever they live. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Some

people

argue that donation firms must deliver their help to those in greatest need despite the

nation

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borders,

whereas

some believe that it should be allocated to local citizens.

This

essay will explain both perspectives and examine why I side with allocating

charity

to

people

who need it the most.

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one

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hand, helping local

resident

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residents

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could empower local

donors

to continuously spare their money on a

charity

as they can see direct impacts on their communities.

For example

, one area struggling with

poor

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education system will get the opportunity to progress if there is enough money to increase facilities,

such

as adding a library and introducing some technologies at school. Allowing

charity

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to take part in

this

issue will significantly help children to get a better education through newly introduced facilities.

Conversely

, if charities are distributed to foreign land, the local

donors

unable

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to see the immediate impacts, and it might discourage them as they could question the accountabilities of the

charity

bodies.

On the other hand

, despite the possible advantage above, I would argue that

charity

should be allocated based on urgency level regardless of where they live. One of the most significant reasons is

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humanitarian principle which means that

people

deserve to get help despite the

nation

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borders. To illustrate, when Tsunami hit Japan, all countries collectively give

aids

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aid

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to victims and survivors because they need hands with medical supplies, access to clean water, and clothing. In

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, they become vulnerable and sufficient

helps

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could determine between life and death. Another reason for

this

is that international

organization

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organizations

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such

as UNICEF will always target children worldwide, which means that they will focus on uplifting children’s lives no matter where they live.

As a result

, the type of each

charity

determines how the money will be distributed, and most international firms with sufficient

donors

will focus on giving

aids

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to those in greatest need. In conclusion, donations specifically directed to home countries are mostly

due to

empowering local

donors

and limited budgets.

Conversely

,

charity

must be given to

people

in greatest need because of humanitarian values and the type of

charity

body. I

am remain

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fully convinced to side with the latest arguments.