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The table below shows the average weekly salaries of men and women working in different occupations. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The table below shows the average weekly salaries of men and women working in different occupations. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The table compares the average incomes per
week
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 between males and females who are working in various positions
such
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 as technicians, service
workers
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, professionals, administrative/clerical
workers
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 and manual labourers. It can be clearly seen that the average
income
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 per
week
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 of the male
staff
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 group working in professional services is by far the highest value in the survey conducted.
Also
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,
while
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 male and female professional
workers
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 reached the top paid in the list, female
workers
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 who work as manual labourers have the lowest salary per
week
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. Men
staff
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 in technical and professional domains can earn the most valuable
income
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 per
week
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, up to 1400 and 2000 US
dollars
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 respectively,
this
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 is marginally higher than that of women workforce, at 900
dollars
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 per
week
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 for technicians and 1900
dollars
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 per
week
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 for professionals.
On the other hand
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, the average
income
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 per working
week
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 for service
workers
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, administrative/clerical
workers
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 and manual labourers between men and women are quite different.
Although
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 the gap between male and female
workers
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 in these occupations is not big enough, male
staff
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 are always being paid by employers slightly higher than female
staff
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. The
income
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 ranges are from 1100 to 1300 for males and 850 to 1000 for females.
Thus
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, the male workforce in these groups could earn 250 to 250
dollars
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 per
week
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 more than females.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words week, workers, income, staff, dollars with synonyms.
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