Due to increase use of aeroplane, air pollution is increasing more and more airports are constructed. Some people say that government should reduce air traffic by taxing it heavily. Do you agree or disagree?

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Air pollution is getting worse and worse as time goes by. Travelling by aeroplane is considered to have deteriorated the situation as global travelling is being increased among people around the world. I agree to some extent with

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essay, I will support my own opinion with examples. On the one hand, the increasing globalization of nations' communication has led to overseas touring since in these days high-tech lifestyle more and more people tend to broaden their horizons by visiting enormous

countries

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as much as possible. Not only does it enhance knowledge but it

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gives the chance of striking relationships from different

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, in 2010 in Canada nearly almost journeyers visited Asian

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of American

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, a high majority of citizens travel overseas with the aim of gaining information about unfamiliar cultures.

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, globalization has a major role in business. Undoubtedly, almost all companies around the globe have collaborations with companies in other continents. It means head seniors and executives have to travel to their teamwork once or twice a week. For illustrate, a high number of companies went bankrupt in the epidemic period related to Corona virus because of the lack of cooperation between them. travelling has a major role in business which can not be omitted from schedules

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, there is an exceedingly increasing amount of pollution all the time.

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, aeroplanes have pumped

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harmful emissions into the atmosphere. What's more, on average in each country, approximately 100 planes take on and off within one hour.

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is because prices are in moderate that even travellers with low salaries can afford

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. A good example of

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would be a blue-collar Worker. It is believed that if the government enhance tickets price exorbitantly, holiday-makers world become reluctant to have holiday frequently.

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, air pollution could decrease by an acceptable percentage. In conclusion,

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aeroplanes give a helping hand to visit everywhere

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within a small amount of time, they have detrimental effects on the world's ecosystem. I believe it should be hindered before the situation worsen as it is not insurmountable.

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Due to increase use of aeroplane, air pollution is increasing more and more airports are constructed. Some people say that government should reduce air traffic by taxing it heavily. Do you agree or disagree?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

In some countries of the world, cars are replacing bicycles. However, in some countries, bicycles are replacing cars. What are the reasons for these two developments? In your opinion, which one is better?

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new fast trains between cities. others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?