Nowadays because of digital technology, it is possible for not only studios but also individuals to produce their own films. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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days,
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has been developing sharply so individuals create their own movies without studios. In my opinion, it is
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development for films because it is
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way to make a film. I will mention that both sides
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a lot of new digital
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that can help them to make it more realistic
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keen on unusual things but it has bad effect for individuals
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, it makes
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believe the artificial world especially for children
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and some kind of powers .
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, there are a variety of positive effects
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as motivation, knowledge and meaning. In my opinion, if
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watch
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movie that was made by digital
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, they can gain
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and meaning so it can improve their
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can be assisted for
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animation which can
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fake
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lifestyle
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from
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developed movies.
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, digital
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should be
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improved because
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can not make a movie
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real life so some
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believe that artificial things but some of them provide
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society. In my opinion, it has
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for individuals
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • democratization of content
  • barriers to entry
  • media landscape
  • financial backing
  • unique perspectives
  • high-quality content
  • market saturation
  • economic impact
  • independent filmmakers
  • traditional studios
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