The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
The line chart illustrates the
number
of shop closures and openings during the priod
of 2011 to 2018. Correct your spelling
period
Overall
, in
the most of time, Change preposition
apply
instead
of starting additional stores
, there were more stores
closing over the 8 years.
To begin
with, in 2011, it seemed to be an awesome start with approximately 8,500 new shops opened
and only 6,500 closed. Wrong verb form
opening
However
, during
2012 to 2014, the Change preposition
from
number
of shop closures were
much more than openings. Correct subject-verb agreement
was
Thus
, the total number
of stores
went down at
that period.
Even though more shops were open and less than 1,000 were closed in 2015, that brought minor helps to Change preposition
during
local
commercial market. In 2016, about 5,100 Add an article
the local
stores
were closed and it had
remained stable for the next 2 years. Unnecessary verb
apply
On the contrary
, merely 4000 shops were open in 2016, and the number
even declined as time passed by. Especially in 2018, it reached lowest
point at only 3000.Correct pronoun usage
its lowest
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, stores with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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