Write a letter to your favourite restaurant. Include the following: - Your reason for writing - What you like about the restaurant - Suggestions for improvement. Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Mr Smith, I am John, living at flat 1, 536, Forest Road, Canterberry 2036. I am writing to you with regard to your

restaurant

services, thanksgiving and some suggestions. First of all, I am a regular customer of Gopal Sweets which is situated near my home. I booked a party hall at your

restaurant

and celebrated my brother's party

last

week. I am not overstating that we all enjoyed the services provided by your staff and felt delighted. Thank you for providing

such

a great service. Moving on, the most favourable thing about your

restaurant

is the ambience and I embellished

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in that room.

Along with

that, all our guests

also

appreciate the cuisine prepared by your professional chef. All the items are mouth-watering and give a delicious taste.

Finally

, I would really appreciate you if you add up some more items to the menu. Because we find these are very limited choice and add some drinks for small children.

Moreover

, provide hygienic areas nearby toilets and hire someone to clean that area on a regular basis. I hope my suggestions would help you to make some improvements in your

restaurant

. Once again I am extremely grateful to you for making that moment mesmerising. Yours Sincerely, John

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