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Write a letter to your favourite restaurant. Include the following: - Your reason for writing - What you like about the restaurant - Suggestions for improvement. Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Mr Smith, I am John, living at flat 1, 536, Forest Road, Canterberry 2036. I am writing to you with regard to your
restaurant
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

 services, thanksgiving and some suggestions. First of all, I am a regular customer of Gopal Sweets which is situated near my home. I booked a party hall at your
restaurant
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

 and celebrated my brother's party
last
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

 week. I am not overstating that we all enjoyed the services provided by your staff and felt delighted. Thank you for providing
such
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

 a great service. Moving on, the most favourable thing about your
restaurant
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

 is the ambience and I embellished
done
Unnecessary verb
apply

The verb done appears to be unnecessary here.

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in that room.
Along with
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

 that, all our guests
also
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

 appreciate the cuisine prepared by your professional chef. All the items are mouth-watering and give a delicious taste.
Finally
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, I would really appreciate you if you add up some more items to the menu. Because we find these are very limited choice and add some drinks for small children.
Moreover
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, provide hygienic areas nearby toilets and hire someone to clean that area on a regular basis. I hope my suggestions would help you to make some improvements in your
restaurant
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

. Once again I am extremely grateful to you for making that moment mesmerising. Yours Sincerely, John

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