You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour.

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Dear Mr David, My name is John and I just moved in with my family in the apartment right next to yours. I am writing a letter to you to inform you about the housewarming dinner held at my place tomorrow. There is a possibility of excessive noise of loud music causing you disturbance . The celebration is going to start in the evening around 8.30 pm. There will be a Buffet dinner during which the band will be performing rock music and later that night the DJ system is gonna take place so which is the type of music usually played at high volume . I understand the disturbance it can cause you and your family, so I decided to write you a letter to inform you about the possible consequences . As I mentioned before I just moved in and we are going to be neighbours from now on so I would like to invite you and your family to our housewarming party which will be helping us get to know each other better. In case you could not able to make it to the party, please bear the trouble for one night for us. Your friendly neighbour, John

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

201 words

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You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

some people say that a lot of scientific research done today is a waste of time and money. what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?