You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour.

Dear Mr David, My name is John and I just moved in with my family in the apartment right next to yours. I am writing a letter to you to inform you about the housewarming dinner held at my place tomorrow. There is a possibility of excessive noise of loud music causing you disturbance . The celebration is going to start in the evening around 8.30 pm. There will be a Buffet dinner during which the band will be performing rock music and later that night the DJ system is gonna take place so which is the type of music usually played at high volume . I understand the disturbance it can cause you and your family, so I decided to write you a letter to inform you about the possible consequences . As I mentioned before I just moved in and we are going to be neighbours from now on so I would like to invite you and your family to our housewarming party which will be helping us get to know each other better. In case you could not able to make it to the party, please bear the trouble for one night for us. Your friendly neighbour, John

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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7 paragraphs

201 words

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You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Many of the world’s cities are currently facing a serious housing shortage. What are some of the reasons for this shortage and what solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience.

Some people think secondary school students should study international news as one of their subjects, while others believe that this is a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Some people think it does not matter if a professional sportsman or sportswoman misbehaves on or off the field if they play well. What is your opinion about this?

Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.