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Many feel today that attention spans are becoming shorter due to prevalence of social media. Upto what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Attention
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 plays a crucial role in almost every area of life including school,
work
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 and relationships. A plethora of
people
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deem
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 that the length of time to pay
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 is nowadays declining
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 the usage of technology. I completely accord with
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 statement and the reasons will be articulated in the subsequent paragraphs. To commence, the most preponderant reason why
people
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 lack
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on
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 their
work
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 is that they are using social media .To elaborate,it is hard for individuals to pay
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 to details or to follow instructions.
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,
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 forget or are easily distracted from their jobs.
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 happens due to the popularity of television, mobile phone, laptops and many more in today's world.
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,recently news came that are suffering from various health problems like hyperactivity disorder
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 usage of the internet.
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, research was conducted by well- a renowned organization and it was found that 70%of
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 are distracted from their jobs. Moving ahead the second reason is that
people
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 may suffer from various health issues which may cause injuries. To explain, in
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 ,condition
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 like to talk a lot,
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,it is hard for a person to sit for a long time to do some
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. Children may jump,run,talk or climb constantly. The individual feels restless and has trouble with impulsivity. To cite an example,recently news came that
people
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 are suffering from various health problems like hyperactivity disorder
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 usage of the internet. The third reason is that it becomes harder for
people
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 to wait for their turn or listen to directions.
People
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 usually lose their temper and become impatient.
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 , in today's world,
people
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 are becoming inattentive in their
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due to
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 which they suffer from ample disorders.
People
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 constantly urge to get new notifications and can not sit for long hours.

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