Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people,however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Traditionally, every
country
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's goal is to increase their economic
growth
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but giving importance to other
goals
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,
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, gender equality, and generating employment are
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other
goals
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that should be paid attention to.
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with, there is nothing wrong about giving importance to economic
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as if there is economic
growth
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country
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's income would be more and
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will lead to an increase in GDP
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Moreover
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economic
growth
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leads to the generation of employment which helps numerous people in getting jobs and helps them in providing basic necessities. People who think about other progress are
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not wrong. So a
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cannot have economic
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as its only objective. A
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should
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concentrate on social
development
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and environmental
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. For ,instance if I were a citizen of a
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I would like that
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to promote gender equality, promotes environmental
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like the creation of new parks etc. A
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should be able to achieve all essential
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apart from just economic
development
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.
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is very necessary as economic
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cannot provide citizens with all the satisfaction. So a
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should clearly mention and achieve the
goals
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in order to maintain
development
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.

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