Your family is going to celebrate an occassion and your child needs a day off from school. Write a letter to the head master of the school. What the occassion is? Why it is importnat that your child attends the celebration? How your child is going to make up for the missed lessons.

Dear

sir

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Sir

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madam

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Madam

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, I am writing

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letter to seek your permission for my child for three days' leave. It is essential for him to attend the retirement party of his

grandfather

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grandfather,

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that

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which

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is going to be organised in

Banglore

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Bangalore

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. We have been living in an extended family and celebrating every occasion with great pomp and show. Since Sheldon Jackson currently studying in 6th

Alpha

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Alpha,

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has been promoted to the next class, we were unable to visit

Banglore

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Bangalore

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. Now

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this

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auspicious day of his grandfather's

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apply

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retirement

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, he

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is willing to throw a party. I want my full family to attend

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event

and

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Sheldon is

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apple of his grandfather's eye, so it's my cordial request to let him attend

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function.

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, I will take complete responsibility for my child's lessons. I already told one of his friends to send

classwork

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done during regular school hours. Being fully conscious of his second-term exams, I am requesting

you

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that you

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grant him leave for a week. I will access the school portal

edusprint education

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Edusprint Education

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to even cover up his homework. Looking forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Selina James

jeetkacha13

Apr 26, 2023

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structure

Make the reason to take leave clear and one main point per paragraph. In this letter, many ideas mix together; pick one main reason and stay with it.

clarity

Fix dates and facts. If the child will be away for three days, give the exact dates. Do not mix 'three days' with 'a week'.

content

Keep the letter short and on topic. Remove extra details about other people or events that do not relate to the leave.

grammar

Check spelling of place names and common words, like Bangalore and retirement.

content

State a clear plan to catch up on work. Say how the school work will be done or sent to the school.

formal tone

Polite start and close with 'Dear Sir/Madam' and 'Yours faithfully'.

responsibility

Shows will to help child catch up on work.

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3
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

192 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Dear
Headmaster
I
am
writing
to
ask
for
one
day
off
for
my
child
due
to
a
family
occasion
Our
family
will
celebrate
our
grandmother's
birthday
This
is
an
important
time
for
us
to
be
together
and
show
our
love
The
child
will
make
up
missed
lessons
homework
notes
from
the
teacher
classmates
read
set
reading
complete
tasks
write
a
short
summary
return
on
time
weekend
contact
information
Thank
you
for
your
understanding

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Along with economic development, the environment of the world is being seriously polluted. What economic activities can cause harm to the environment? What can be done to prevent this?

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