It seems argued that most
parents
provide their children with everything they desire and Use synonyms
also
grant them the liberty to carry out decisions without supervising them. Linking Words
This
essay will discuss why I believe Linking Words
this
is not an appropriate method of upbringing as it can result in overdependence and other menaces.
One commonly cited benefit of buying children everything they so desire is that it raises their Linking Words
self esteem
Add a hyphen
self-esteem
especially
for kids who Add the comma(s)
,especially
suffers
bullying from peers and whose Correct subject-verb agreement
suffer
self confidence
has been shattered through peer pressure. Add a hyphen
self-confidence
For example
, in a study carried out amongst teenagers in a correctional institute in Lagos, Nigeria, it was found Linking Words
out
that 90% of adolescents who suffer low Change preposition
apply
self esteem
were able to boost their confidence after showering them with gifts and giving them autonomy to perform various activities. Add a hyphen
self-esteem
In addition
, most guardians allow their kids Linking Words
do
whatever they want so that their kids can feel loved and trusted as most youngsters these days believe that denial of their freedom is a lack of trust from their Fix the infinitive
to do
parents
. So most Use synonyms
parents
Use synonyms
over indulge
their wards as means of expressing their heartfelt love towards them.
Correct your spelling
overindulge
However
, lavishing youngsters with luxuries and giving them undue permission can make them Linking Words
to
become Change the verb form
apply
over dependent
on their guardians as they would not be able to purchase basic necessities for themselves especially when they are Add a hyphen
over-dependent
matured
to do so and are no longer under their Replace the word
mature
Use synonyms
parents
tutelage. Change to a genitive case
parent's
parents'
For instance
, a child who is used to receiving expensive from his Linking Words
parents
might not be able to fend for himself after the demise of Use synonyms
such
Linking Words
parents
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, if a child is not getting the luxury he is accustomed to, he may engage in dubious activities Linking Words
such
as stealing, prostitution or gambling in order to meet up with Linking Words
previous
lifestyle.
In conclusion, I believe providing children with everything they need has Correct pronoun usage
his previous
it
benefits. Change the pronoun
its
However
, Linking Words
such
practice can make young individuals Linking Words
to
rely on their Change the verb form
apply
parents
excessively and engage in shady activities when Use synonyms
desires
are not met.Correct pronoun usage
their desires