Write on the following topic. The most important function of music is that it helps people reduce Stress. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or expirience. You should write at least 250 words.

The magic of

melody

as a tool for curbing

weight

among individuals can not be overemphasized.

However

, I

also

believe that hanging out with folk is paramount.

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essay will discuss the vital concept of tune as it affects individuals who tackled

weight

in a positive way,

in addition

, going to renditions, and  catching up with family is a vital instrument.and relevant examples would be given.

To begin

with, I strongly believe that

melody

has in itself a soothing potential to virtually ease up every form of stress in people every now and

then

.

Although

, people, might respond differently to different forms of opera based on their peculiarity and taste for types of

melody

like,  pop, blues, and rap

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. Notwithstanding, the source and nature of

weight

whether physical, psychological or emotional find rest and ease with the sound of music. A visit to rendition could do the magic as well.

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significant addition, hanging out with folks

also

has a way of tackling the negative effects of

weight

on individuals, which is why bonding with family members, gives one a sense of belonging and support. It eradicates the pains of stress and creates an atmosphere of peace

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, assists people

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out the detrimental consequences of

weight

. My grandma loved to play

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by Don Williams, anytime

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blue and it really worked for her. I,

on the other hand

, have a knack for fishing with my siblings anytime I'm stressed out from work. We usually go to a small river just on the outskirts of my locality and spend the whole day fishing and listening to the stereo player we carried along. I'm a fan of Michael Jackson's songs. After ,sunset I usually get over the stressful situation which engulfed me. In conclusion, rap is an enormous and effective therapy

that is

used, and still is and would continue to be in use as an instrument which is widely effective in

weight

management.

Also

, the spirit of belonging and the comfort of folks do play a significant role get rid of

weight

. So whenever you feel stressed out hangouts with family, listen to the sounds of the musical and visit any rendition.