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Some young people like to copy the behavior and clothes of famous people today. Why might this be the case? What problems can it cause?

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Nowadays some generation of young
ones
 tends to imitate the
fashion
 and
lifestyle
 of
celebrities
.
This
 essay will focus on how these young
ones
 want to be known leading to the pollution of our
society
. Social media has contributed greatly to
this
 thread being faced by these young
ones
 in
this
 generation by exposing them to the day-to-day activities of these
celebrities
'
fashion
 and
lifestyle
, these young
ones
 think it by magic or by some other ways that they got all they display on social media and want to live the
lifestyle
 they are living too. As a ,result they start looking for all means to search for Money to live the same
lifestyle
 and
fashion
 and some even go to the extent of wanting to be Popular and seeking fetish means for that purpose. Examples are the Yahoo boys (Scammer consulting
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 for charms to use in dupping people in the
society
 in other to get money from them to imitate the particular
celebrities
 they wish to copy.
Consequently
, the imitating attitude developed by these young
ones
 will infiltrate
society
 and result in activities like stealing
,
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 prostitution, drug Abuse and addiction etc. examples are young
ones
 found in thuggery, Some believe that they can
also
 become
celebrities
 by disturbing the
society
 they belong to, stealing from innocent
ones
 among others bad attitude developed. Some of the rich
ones
 in
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society
 use these young
ones
 to oppress the poor in the societies. In conclusion, it is no doubt that the
lifestyle
 and
fashion
 trends of these
celebrities
 have brought about so much misfortune in our present
society
.
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